Chaos

[benperkins]

Chaos

There out on the water
I pray for forgivieness
In the eyes of the lord
for no man can touch me
dam thier order, dam thier world
I am a child of Chaos, a free spirt

Down There in the forest
I dream of a free world
All they care about is in the head
All I care about is in the hart
Not all chaos is from hell below
Its all in your minds
I just have no order
My hart is aflame with freedom

Up there on the montain
I satnd naked and exposed
I see all of gods creation
I take fight like a bird
My hart reaches the Stars

Ben

[benperkins]

I take it noone likes this peom :p

Ben

[canoilers]

Just because no one replyed doesn't mean this poem has touched people maybe they don't feel the need to reply. I liked it
It has emotion, its a work of art, that you should be proud of. besides the only opinion that counts is yours its your baby.