Have you ever...

[Jessica82865]

Have you ever looked into the eyes,
Of the one you thought u loved;
And have you ever told them,
That they were the only one;
Have you ever had your heart shatterd,
Just for saying the truth;
And if not have you ever cryed,
Because its all inside of you.

Have you ever spoke the words,
You dared not say,
Which brings back fire;
have you ever felt sorry,
for a wrong you did,
Then get branded a liar;

Have you ever had a secret
Have you ever dissapered
Do you miss the love that made you cry
Is their voice all that you hear

Have you ever held someone so tight
it took your breath away
Have you ever been left so cold
Even in the hottest day

life will go on
With or with out them
If you want to live free
Dont get tied down with a fantasy

BY ME



(i should take my own advice)

i was bored the other night ;)

[canoilers]

Word Sister!!!

[BADfan69]

Like I sais on MSN, Andrea: You're amazing and you're writing kicks ***!!! :p

Chris

[pearl]

So very nice and `powerful words...i can relate to every single line of that.

Pearl:)

[Stephania5]

Wow! That is so beautiful! I especially love this line:
Have you ever been left so cold
Even in the hottest day

Breathtaking!!! :) :up:

[SHANIANUTS!]

Originally posted by Jessica82865
Have you ever looked into the eyes,
Of the one you thought u loved;
And have you ever told them,
That they were the only one;
Have you ever had your heart shatterd,
Just for saying the truth;
And if not have you ever cryed,
Because its all inside of you.

Have you ever spoke the words,
You dared not say,
Which brings back fire;
have you ever felt sorry,
for a wrong you did,
Then get branded a liar;

Have you ever had a secret
Have you ever dissapered
Do you miss the love that made you cry
Is their voice all that you hear

Have you ever held someone so tight
it took your breath away
Have you ever been left so cold
Even in the hottest day

life will go on
With or with out them
If you want to live free
Dont get tied down with a fantasy

BY ME



(i should take my own advice)

i was bored the other night ;) You have lots of creative juices flowing within you - more pleaseeeeeeeeee:kiss:

[Woody&Love 4ever]

Hey Andrea it's so beautiful, deep, touching, and TRUE!! I can relate to it as well :) I love your way to write! :love:

You know what, yesterday came up with a song (very little song!) and while playing it on the guitar I remembered your suggestions :D Thanks :D

ely

[canoilers]

Da ya think this could be a calling. its good

[Babee Shania]

Originally posted by Jessica82865
Have you ever looked into the eyes,
Of the one you thought u loved;
And have you ever told them,
That they were the only one;
Have you ever had your heart shatterd,
Just for saying the truth;
And if not have you ever cryed,
Because its all inside of you.


WOW ANDREA!!!! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!! THAT WAS AWESOME!! wow that was perfect! :love:

[Thea]

i didnt see this till now!
What a great poem!!:love: you should post more here;)

[LuvinST]

I love it & I can really relate to it. It's such a beautiful poem!