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Hi,
this is my first try and it's not really a poem, just a few thoughts.
Her I go:
They said there is love for everyone
They said: You just need time
They never said how long to wait
or what to do interim
I did what they said
I took some time
But I'm still alone
So here is my question
what I want to know is
How long will it take for me?
Ces*
LovelyShania
08-12-2002, 4:31pm
Awww it's so nice :love: :up: :p
Julie
woah, i can really relate to that! to every line... we'll just have to hope we'll find love sometime, Ces! :)
youre a good writer!!
Annette
10-01-2002, 10:22am
Originally posted by Thea
woah, i can really relate to that! to every line... we'll just have to hope we'll find love sometime, Ces! :)
youre a good writer!!
Yep, same here...
Great poem, wish I could worte poems like you and Thea
Thanks!
To be honest, I don't think it's soooo good. It was just what I felt and I guess I just wanted to share.
Everything's a bit strange at the moment. There just these moments when I feel so alone and I miss just a special person. I feel I'm surrounded by all this love and I want to feel that, too.
Guess it were just a few things at the same time.
Ces*
I know!! i feel the same way. Sometimes, everything feels so weird and i feel so alone. sometimes i think that it must be me its something wrong with, all these ppl around me have someone, and i never get a second look from guys. and im sooo shy when it comes to guys, especially when its other ppl around. so even if "mr. right" stood right in front of me and i had the chance i wouldnt have dared to even talk to him :rolleyes: not that anyones interested anyway..Some times i wished that i at least could feel how it was like to be so deeply in love that i couldnt think about anything else, even if the other person wasnt feeling the same towards me. then i would at least get to feel what is was like to be truly in love. and not just have a crush on someone.
I know what you feel. But I think the worst thing that can happen to you is that you fall so deeply in love with someone and he doesn't feel the same. It can break your heart. Sometimes I wonder if it isn't better never to be in love like this if you can't stay together or if you never come together or if it's better not to feel so deeply ever.
But I still believe in love and in finding the right ONE. I don't know if there's just one right person for everyone and some people will never find this person or if there can be more right ones ;). I just know if I should ever met my mr. right then it's gotta be him from the first moment on. I don't believe in that concept of giving a chance to everyone and wait what happens. It must be the right one from the first second.
Ces*
LuvinST
10-12-2002, 5:17am
I know how you feel... I feel that way at times to. I was in love with a few years ago & I still care so much for him. I miss him to...
Originally posted by Thea
sometimes i think that it must be me its something wrong with,
There's nothing wrong with you, Thea. You are good and sweet and caring person. :love: Maybe it's just not the right time, or the guys are just blind or whatever. But it's definitely not about you, you're great. Good luck, girl. :)
~Carol~
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