Ghost

[benperkins]

Ghost

By Ben Perkins

Just a moment to remind me
you passed me by and it opened me up
everything I had forgoten all thanks to you
Your face is still lovely
and you seem to be fine today
feeling's just burst open
You where never mine but I loved you
Four years ago my heart lay in peices
It took a long while to mend
It was just a moment though
then you passed me by and walked away
Imight as well have seen a ghost

Ben

[Babee Shania]

That was nice benny, but sad :(

[canoilers]

that is very touching, see your words do touch people. I'm glad you didn't give up buddy.:)

[Cesdra]

I liked it <g>.

I had an experience like that yesterday - I can really relate the words.

[benperkins]

Originally posted by Cesdra
I had an experience like that yesterday - I can really relate the words.

Looks like we both did on the same day! I wrote the peom soon after I saw someone :(

Ben

[Woody&Love 4ever]

How sad.. :( but it's very touching :love:

ely

[Thea]

wow that was a great poem Ben! but really sad :(

[adt4444]

That was great! Some of the best I've read on this board. :up: keep up the GREAT work benny!