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Cesdra
10-12-2002, 2:14pm
Hi,

this is some kind of a song I wrote in Italy. I like it much more than the other thing I wrote. Well, I hope you like it :)


Tell me

I get lost in your beautiful eyes
And if I should live my life twice
Both would be with you
Please believe me that's true!

(Bridge)
See how far we got, listen to my heart
Isn't this worth to make a new start?

(Chorus)
Tell me, why did you go.
Tell me, I need to know
If you wanted to be free
Was it neccessary to leave me?

I never loved someone so much.
I still remember your very first touch.
Your kiss so soft and warm
That's when I couldn't stop the storm.
Thea
10-12-2002, 2:20pm
Wow thats so great! :shocked: :D :cool:
benperkins
10-12-2002, 3:06pm
That is really good :D Man all the people here are so talented! :)

Ben
Baby Mutt
10-12-2002, 4:48pm
Thats great Ces! :D

-Vale-
LuvinST
10-13-2002, 2:22pm
That's great :) That would sound great as a song!
Cesdra
10-14-2002, 8:37am
Thanks :D

I wish I had any idea for a melody :)
Twain Fan 97
10-14-2002, 9:01am
Hey this is really good Ces!
What wonderful thoughts you have arranged here! I think this would make a great song!
As for the melody...that's always hard isn't it? Maybe you can sit at the piano or with your guitar one day and just play some stuff and who knows? You might get something that would perfectly match the words! :)

Ted :]
Cesdra
10-14-2002, 12:52pm
@ Teddie, yes maybe. I played a bit the last days who knows...

The poem had some kind of it's own life :D I had a picture in mind when I started of what the poem should be about but when it came to the bridge and especially to the chorus it just changed and it became a different direction. But it worked out fine and so I just changed two lines and it was good :)
This thing makes me really believe I can write poems :D

seeya guys
Twain Fan 97
10-14-2002, 5:20pm
Originally posted by Cesdra
@ Teddie, yes maybe. I played a bit the last days who knows...

The poem had some kind of it's own life :D I had a picture in mind when I started of what the poem should be about but when it came to the bridge and especially to the chorus it just changed and it became a different direction. But it worked out fine and so I just changed two lines and it was good :)
This thing makes me really believe I can write poems :D

seeya guys

Of course you can! This is really good! I like it! :)