Self written poam: Goodbye my sweet love

[pep_sesse]

I got an ide to make a poam the other night, i really like to write poams, the poams do always come from my heart :)

Goodbye my sweet love

You are the voice within me
that i can't live without
you'r the faith i belive in
that recalls all my love

What do you think of me
when i tell you all this
do you think it's a wish
that i'm blind or a witch

Please tell it to my face
all the lies they can wait
will you give me a hope
or do i have to call god

I remember all that love
all that warmth you gave to me
i just can't live without you
but i have to move on
soo goodbye my sweet love
i will always love you

[Marieke_Kurvers]

It's a very sad poem, but I like it! :great:

Thankx,

:kiss:

Marieke

[MiniShaniaTwain]

I like it! :)

[Cath]

awe, lovely poem:):up:

[Esther]

great poem!!! :up:

[ShaniaFan517]

Nice poem! great job! :)

[pep_sesse]

Originally posted by Marieke_Kurvers
It's a very sad poem, but I like it! :great:

Thankx,

:kiss:

Marieke

Thank you Marieke :)

[pep_sesse]

Originally posted by MiniShaniaTwain
I like it! :)

Thank you MiniShaniaTwain ;)

[pep_sesse]

Originally posted by Cath
awe, lovely poem:):up:

Thank you Cath :]

[pep_sesse]

Originally posted by shania-little
great poem!!! :up:

Thank you shania-little :) :supwink:

[pep_sesse]

Originally posted by ShaniaFan517
Nice poem! great job! :)

Thanks for saying that ShaniaFan517, it is nice to hear somebodys opinion :) :smirk:

[thecurse]

Great poem, you got more?

[pep_sesse]

Originally posted by thecurse
Great poem, you got more?

Hi thecurse thanks, i have written 2 other poams in this forum, you can find them if you look at the last 5 days, the poams are called Impression and Life ;)

[thecurse]

I saw them, still wont more though :)

[fanchette]

Great poem. I love the tone!