My song I love you

[shania_lover123]

I have been gone a while from posting songs/poems This only took me under 10 min.'s to write but here is one I just wrote, Can you tell me if it is any good?? Tell the truth!!!

I wake UP every mornin' to you face
then I take out that little wooden case
I kow the pictures are starting to fade
this is what I have to say...

Do you remember how we met?
The way you said "you are so pretty"
We met at the Shania Conventation
right then and there I knew we where ment to be
I just want to say I love you

When we walk in the park and see those two little kids
I think, that is how we use to be but know we have been together for 40 years, Then I look at you and say

Do you remember how we met?
The way you said you are so pretty
We met at the Shania Conventation thingy
right then adn there I knew we where ment to be
I just want to say I love you

I dont know what I'd do without you
We will be togther all of out days
When I hear our song Forever and For Always
It make me think of..

How we met
The way you said you are so pretty
We met at the Shania conventation thingy
right then and there I knew we where ment to be
I just want to say I love you

Baby,...... I love..... you......

[cilayin]

That's a nice song.. Now we just need to add some instruments and sell a million records. :D hahah, good stuff though

- Tommy

[SevenUp!]

Never get tired of reading such a great song/poem....glad you posted it here too Kim. :)

[melli]

Aww, that's sweet! Thanks for sharing!

[shania_lover123]

Your Welcome, Thank you for reading it!!

[Troll]

Great song.

[JimColyer]

I had a melody going in my head for awhile.

[Alex]

Just read the letter of your song. Very nice words on it:] Thanks!

[eileen_regina]

butiful