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orchestragirl
03-24-2007, 11:10pm
shows exactly how you're feeling right now! Yes, this is really similar to the "pick a song lyric that..." game, but this one is a little more challenging! Here you actually have to write one! It can be rhymed, free-verse, again...whatever you want!

goinUP
03-24-2007, 11:12pm
Sometimes life feels bad,
But once you realize all you had...
And you lose it so fast,
You wish that time would last.

Okay, NOT how I'm feeling....but I can only write sad stuff!!

SevenUp!
03-24-2007, 11:16pm
When you need a friend, make a cup of tea....I'll think of you, you'll think of me.

orchestragirl
03-24-2007, 11:19pm
"If I want to ever become the person I used to be, and go back to when things were better, I have to let go of all the pain in my heart, because I didn't have it then."

I can only write sad stuff too! :eek:

dreamer
03-24-2007, 11:36pm
what is easy isn't always right I hope you can sleep with"easy" tonight:mad::cry:

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 12:25am
when life gets tough and you've had enough, close your eyes and look within; the strength you need will be in your heart

goinUP
03-25-2007, 12:27am
Hey, that's a good one, Captain Sponge! We should start calling you Tennyson! ;)

Here's one:
Remember the times you want to forget, cause they give you something to regret, and that's a lesson to learn.

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 12:30am
:funny: So that would be Super Tennyson Bertling Captain Sponge III?

goinUP
03-25-2007, 12:33am
No.

Super Sir Captain Lord Alfred Tennyson Sponge-Bertling III

:D

dreamer
03-25-2007, 12:35am
I know where all the other nicknames come from but Bertling III?:huh:

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 12:36am
No.

Super Sir Captain Lord Alfred Tennyson Sponge-Bertling III

:D

Try fitting that on a driver's license. ;)

goinUP
03-25-2007, 12:38am
Robert's the third Robert.

Bertling...well.....I don't exactly know where I got that. I got the "Bert" from "RoBERT". Sometimes poor Robert ends up as just "Bert" or "Bertie" (when he's not around) :hide:. As for the "ling" part...goodness, I don't know! It just came to me randomly, I guess. I also have an obsession with making up nicknames for people! :)

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 12:46am
Sometimes poor Robert ends up as just "Bert" or "Bertie" (when he's not around) :hide:.

The things you learn on a Saturday night. ;) lol!!

goinUP
03-25-2007, 12:49am
LOL! Yeah, me and Julia normally call you that when you're not there. But that's what you get for not being there in the first place!!!

Besides, it's too tiring to type out Robert all the time.

*Question to self: As if Bertling is any shorter!?*
It's actually longer.

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 12:52am
But that's what you get for not being there in the first place!!!

Pardon me!! ;) When's the last time I missed a meeting? :uhh: Not my fault I was late yesterday. :p lol!!

goinUP
03-25-2007, 12:54am
Pardon me!! ;) When's the last time I missed a meeting? :uhh: Not my fault I was late yesterday. :p lol!!

LOL! LOL! :funny:

1. Did you just say "pardon me"!? LOL!
2. I was talking about PMs!!! LOL!!!!! And you fell for it.
3. I know it wasn't your fault.
4. I didn't mention last night anyway.
5. LOL! You said "pardon me"!!!!
6. LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 12:58am
So you're talking about me behind closed doors....not sure if I should be flattered or worried. :p

goinUP
03-25-2007, 1:01am
Goodness gracious!!

To be honest, it depends what we're discussing. If we're talking about something serious (worried about you, etc.) then we call you Robert. Being silly, like "where is he?" or "weirdo..." we say Bert, Bertling, Bertie, Captian Sponge, Super Sponge or make up something new, lol!

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 1:06am
LOL!!

At least I'm worth talking about. :p

goinUP
03-25-2007, 1:07am
Yeah, see! We don't talk about just anyone!

goinUP
03-25-2007, 1:41am
Gosh dangit, Bertling!

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 1:46am
lol!!

I meant to put that there....and this here:

it's alright to cry, even if you don't know why...the tears you shed, can clear your head

goinUP
03-25-2007, 1:48am
Well, nice work then! LOL!

Awww!! That's so sweet. You should write a full poem outta that. Or a song, whatever works!

SevenUp!
03-25-2007, 1:52am
Yeah I should. ;)

goinUP
03-25-2007, 1:54am
Hmmm....was that a....*gasp!*

SNEAK PREVIEW?!

goinUP
03-25-2007, 2:24am
Dang it I can't find it! I gotta quit saving things under random letters!

goinUP
03-25-2007, 2:26am
WAIIIITTT NO I FOUND IT!!! Yes yes yes!

I try to think about Lennon
Harrison Conan in the afternoon
I try to think about shopping malls
Music halls
The pirates from the old lagoon
I try to think about sushi bars
Yucky tar
Anything to get me through
I just can't concentrate
You're all I think about these days

I try to contemplate the world wars,
Who's running for
Democrats and independants
I try to think about Shania Twain
Mutt Lange
Making hits all the time
I try to focus on the local news
Old booze
Everytime I think I might
I just can't concentrate
You're all I think about these days
My mind wanders where it will
When it settles right on you
I forget what I should say
I forget what I should do

My mind wanders where it will
When it settles right on you
I forget what I should say
I forget what I should do

I try to think about white dresses
Big messes
The Beatles or the Rolling Stones
I try to think about blonde curls
School girls
Fast food and violins
I try to think about the Fall trends
Big Bend
But I guess I should have known
I just can't concentrate
You're all I think about these days
You're all I think about these days

orchestragirl
03-25-2007, 5:07pm
LOL that is a good one Jenna! And i've DEFINITELY felt that way

goinUP
03-25-2007, 5:20pm
Thanks. It was a parallel off of Patty Loveless' song "I Try to Think About Elvis".

goinUP
04-16-2007, 1:57am
Come on, let's have some fun- make a big huge mess and scare everyone!! Make them think we're crazy, even a bit nuts- come on, stop being lazy, get up and dance!!!

(And to think it's almost midnight....:uhh: )

orchestragirl
04-16-2007, 2:45pm
Life is a highway, you can spend the whole ride looking back
But it won't do anybody any good, so what's the point of that?

goinUP
04-16-2007, 9:17pm
One day this'll be done,
But until then make it worth while,
Cause when it's really gone,
It'll only be a memory in a file.

orchestragirl
04-23-2007, 12:41pm
It's Monday again, so let's go everyone!
Don't sit around moping about the weekend that's gone!
Enjoy your day, 'cause you never know, it just might be your last,
So get up and let's go everyone!

SevenUp!
04-28-2007, 9:18pm
There's a hole in my heart that won't go away.
There's a hole in my heart since you left me that day.

goinUP
04-29-2007, 12:42am
Awwww. :(

There's sometimes I want to run,
But I know that, when it's done,
It'll still be me and you, you and me,
And at that I smile, come and see.

SevenUp!
04-29-2007, 1:47pm
There's a hole in my heart that won't go away, it isn't going to mend.
I don't understand and I don't know why but today I lost a friend.

goinUP
04-29-2007, 2:07pm
Such a beautiful line,
But I hope for you,
That you never see that time.

goinUP
05-20-2007, 12:52am
What a day, what a year,
Things have gone by and it's time I fear.
Will there be enough? Or more than I need?
But it'll be hard, guaranteed.

orchestragirl
06-19-2007, 3:31am
I'm so sad to see you leave, but I know that you'll be back

The only thing that keeps me from flying to where you are and begging you not to leave, I know
Is that I love you enough to let you go.

goinUP
06-19-2007, 3:33am
Maybe when I go,
I'll go the other way.
I'll come to see you all,
I won't leave- I'll stay.

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:05am
Sometimes we lose things,
And others we spread our wings.
But we can't go along
Wishing to be strong.
Just do it, show your strength-
Show you can take this to any length.

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 12:11am
When you need someone to lean on
Count on me to be there
And when the world seems harsh and cold
You'll always have someone to run to

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:13am
If we're gonna get through this,
You have to make me one promise.
Tell me everything, and I will too,
Because there's nothing I can't tell you.

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 12:16am
You know I would and always will
'Cause that's what best friends do. :hugs:
We'll get through everything and cone out in the other side
Stronger than we ever were before.

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:17am
When we come out on the sunny side,
We'll feel the warmth, and never have to hide.
But until then we can enjoy the rain,
Peaceful, but full of pain.

SevenUp!
07-17-2007, 12:22am
That's one promise for three
and a deal we can do
If you'll share with me,
I'll share with you. :hugs:

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:24am
That's the way it's supposed to be,
I'll talk to you and you'll talk to me.
Because, after all, this is a promise for three!

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 12:27am
Since it's for three
I'll get in on it too
Because there isn't anything
I wouldn't do for you.

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:28am
We need you to do it too,
Because without you, it wouldn't do.
Without you, it would be incomplete...
The two ends just wouldn't meet.

SevenUp!
07-17-2007, 12:31am
Then that's what we'll do
From this moment on
and all the way through
Not for just this one but all of our days
I promise you this Forever And For Always :love:

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 12:33am
I'll be there if you will too
Together there's nothing we can't do.

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:34am
You guys are such great writers,
Even when we're pulling all nighters!
No matter how long, you never tire
And there is always that spark in your wire.

SevenUp!
07-17-2007, 12:40am
You were right there beside me but where did you go?
I could feel your heart beating you were so close.
What happened to us is what I'd like to know.

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 12:41am
We're still here and always will be
Right here with you- it's plain to see
That we'll never be apart
Not with the love that's in all our hearts.
:hugs:

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:44am
You were right there beside me but where did you go?
I could feel your heart beating you were so close.
What happened to us is what I'd like to know.

:cry: :cry: :cry:
We're right here, and always will be...
The three of us, just us three.
We haven't gone, and we won't go
I hope that's something you already know.

SevenUp!
07-17-2007, 12:53am
We've been through it all, all through the years
Happy and sad times, laughter and tears

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 12:54am
That we'll always be together will always be true
Through everything we say and everything we do
And no matter what through all of my years
I'll always have you guys and that I hold dear.

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:58am
We'll never let go,
And we'll never say no.
We'll never look back,
And we'll never be haunted by the past.

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 2:46am
We'll hold on through everything
We'll stay strong through anything
We'll be together and be the most awesome friends
I'll always have you till the very end.

goinUP
07-17-2007, 2:48am
Suitcases we are...
Even from afar.
And when life raises that bar,
We'll just jump that much higher.

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 2:52am
I'm so glad we have each other
Together we can get through anything.

goinUP
07-17-2007, 2:53am
Anything and everything,
We need nothing.
Nothing but each other, that is,
And for that, we have a promise.

SevenUp!
07-17-2007, 3:16am
Pretty soon I'm off to bed and on the pillow I'll rest my head
I'll close my eyes and go to sleep, this is my promise I will keep
I'll get up at six and get ready for work
No coffee for me, instant or perked
I'll come home again at the end of the day
I'll talk to you then, and this is what I'll say
I thank the stars in the heavens above
For you all are the best, and you are all who I love. :love:

goinUP
07-17-2007, 3:20am
You're not the only one thanking the stars in the heavens above. :love: :]

orchestragirl
07-17-2007, 3:20am
I'm glad to hear you say that but hate to see you go
As for keeping your promise, that I already know
I trust you to do that and take care of yourself
Because you know that we love you more than anthing else
So put your head on your pillow and lay down to rest
And remember the ones who love you the best
It's late here, so I'll go to bed too
And when I sleep, I'll dream of you.
:hugs:

SevenUp!
07-17-2007, 9:08am
I'll get up at six and get ready for work

Aren't you proud?!! :p

goinUP
07-17-2007, 12:28pm
:funny: :funny:

orchestragirl
11-24-2007, 7:21pm
No one knows why things had to go this way
I'm always looking back on those days
Happiness and Sunshine, it never came to mind
That it would soon be over...nothing lasts for all time
And now this sounds too much like a sad poem I already wrote
And I'm being really depressing
So I better stop now.

goinUP
11-24-2007, 7:32pm
Things happen, that's life...
Sometimes people don't hear our audible cries.
All we can do is scream a little bit louder,
And make sure we hold our heads just a but prouder.
Cause this is our life, it's now or never...
We're not gonna live forever.

orchestragirl
11-25-2007, 2:42pm
Sometimes I'm so happy I can't believe
I ever felt the way I wrote about
This is one of those times
I feel like going ouside and laying in the grass
and shouting from happiness

goinUP
11-25-2007, 2:47pm
I feel like doin' the boot scootin' boogie...
Forget tears, loneliness and crimes...
I'm gonna give my hair a curl,
And scream out loud cause I'm a
NASHVILLE GIRL! :cowboy:

orchestragirl
11-25-2007, 2:49pm
I'm one too, 'cause being a NASHVILLE GIRL
Doesn't depend on geography
But on what's in your heart.

goinUP
11-25-2007, 2:51pm
NASHVILLE GIRLS wear their boots proud,
NASHVILLE GIRLS sing strong and loud!
NASHVILLE GIRLS are everywhere, all the time!
NASHVILLE GIRLS write songs with cheesy rhyme! :p

orchestragirl
11-25-2007, 2:59pm
NASHVILLE GIRLS don't care if you laugh at their hat
NASHVILLE GIRLS will only be prouder, what'cha think about that?
NASHVILLE GIRLS love listening to this song
NASHVILLE GIRLS will listen to it all day long!

goinUP
11-25-2007, 3:02pm
NASHVILLE GIRLS tip their hats as you walk by,
NASHVILLE GIRLS go to honky tonks, or cattle auctions for the night!
NAHSVILLE GIRLS work all day and ride into the moon,
NASHVILLE GIRLS are comin' your way, reeeeal soon!

orchestragirl
11-25-2007, 3:03pm
Since this isn't the "Talk in Rhyme thread" I can say...

I'm so excited and I wanted to tell you
The Release Date is March 25th!!!! :D :: :D :D :D D: D: :D

orchestragirl
11-25-2007, 3:04pm
:LOL!!!! Excitement overload there - sorry for smileys! LOL!!!

goinUP
11-25-2007, 3:05pm
Excitement overload??? :biglaugh:

OMG!! That's my best friend's birthday!!!! :eek: :D :boogie:

orchestragirl
11-25-2007, 3:06pm
If it's not delayed again.
But it won't be! :D

goinUP
11-25-2007, 3:17pm
It won't be!!
it won't be!!
Because she's ready, you see...
To release her new album -
It's guaranteed! :D

dreamer
11-25-2007, 9:53pm
lol this isn't the TIRT is it:huh:

goinUP
11-25-2007, 10:24pm
lol this isn't the TIRT is it:huh:

When I write, I rhyme...simple as that. ;)

dreamer
11-25-2007, 10:41pm
well gee
you should've warned me!

goinUP
11-25-2007, 10:44pm
:p Sorry about that! :funny:

dreamer
11-25-2007, 10:53pm
I thought I went to the wrong thread backed out and clicked it again

orchestragirl
11-07-2008, 2:07pm
Well this isn't quite "original" but it isn't exactly an existing song so I guess it belongs here! It's a bit of my version of Shania's version of That Don't Impress Me Much! It doesn't flow, hardly rhymes well and makes me sound like a generally angry person :funny: but had you been in my shoes, you'd get it! :biglaugh:

Oh, so you moved to the big city, acted like an idiot and then tried to get me to talk to you again?
That don't impress me much!
You think you're cool
But you were a jerk way too much
Don't get me wrong
I sure don't think you're alright
And don't bother talking to me
On those lonely nights -
'Cause you don't impress me much.

dreamer
11-07-2008, 2:40pm
not bad at all

goinUP
11-07-2008, 3:20pm
:funny:

My mother has lost ability to help
She's really smelly like felt
And I'm mad at her but oh well,
Because there's a closet under the stairwell!

:biglaugh: