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goinUP
09-26-2007, 7:36pm
Today we had to write/turn in 3 poems in creative writing, and this was my lyric poem. (Please note that I was listening to Martina McBride's "How I Feel" when writing this! lol! :p)

Sun shining down on your face
Strolling through an old, familiar place.
The Eiffel Tower just after midnight
Passion burning like a candle light.

That's how I feel when you're around
Like new music with a nostalgic sound.
Snowflakes landing on my coat and hat
Laughing because life's just like that.

Glancing up to see a shooting star
A sunset ride in a brand new car.
The smell of grandma's apple pie
Blushing and having no idea why.

That's how I feel when you're around
Like a queen wearing her new, golden crown.
A phone call from an old friend,
Reading a good book to the very end...
That's how I feel.

orchestragirl
09-26-2007, 7:44pm
Wow, that was great! I like that one even more than Martina's "How I Feel!"

SevenUp!
09-26-2007, 9:21pm
Martina would be proud she had anything to do with that amazing poem Jenna!! Way to be!! :up:

goinUP
09-26-2007, 10:38pm
Aww, thanks you two! :hugs: :hugs:

Alex
09-26-2007, 11:38pm
Amazing Jenna, but I didn't notice in you were hearing martina :eek: lol..

:boogie:

goinUP
09-27-2007, 12:13am
:eek:

Haha thanks, Alex!

Alex
09-27-2007, 12:20am
you're welcome.. :eek::eek::eek:

taniashain
09-27-2007, 1:24am
Jenna I love your poems. You're so talented!

goinUP
09-27-2007, 1:49am
Thanks so much, Terri! That means alot.

StarryShania
09-27-2007, 6:38pm
That's a great poem Jenna. :great:

goinUP
09-27-2007, 6:45pm
Thanks, Alicia! :D

Alex
09-27-2007, 10:27pm
I've writen poems, well I wrote them in the past when I was intelligent :eek::funny: LOL... I had thought to post them here but waaa I can't translate the poetic language spanish to english :confused: it would sound terrible bad, and if I post them in spanish, you won't understand them, so I quit the idea :eek:.. Hahaha..

I enjoy yours and misty ones and all the freaky poetics :] :D

Ditzy_Gal
12-07-2007, 2:45pm
That was a really nice poem!!! I liked it alot!!

Troll
12-07-2007, 2:55pm
Great poem

goinUP
12-07-2007, 7:14pm
Thanks so much! :D