Shania

[dreamer]

I feel so strange
When I say I love you
I miss you
I don't know if you will ever know how much you mean
through hell and back you and I have been
a mother to me,
no strings attached
no hurtful hands
or stinging words
So brave
so loving

I know you make mistakes
you're human too
and yet you reach out
and see me through

I hate waiting for you
but there are worse things to do

PLEASE COME HOME SOON
we miss you

[orchestragirl]

Great one Misty :)

[StarryShania]

Aw sweet poem Misty.

[SevenUp!]

Way to go Misty!! :up:

[dreamer]

Dawn will burn
I will rise
I am still a little girl
so confused
My mommy is so sweet now but I can't get her hate out of my soul
I want to love her but I don't remember joy residing with us
dead girl walking rinsed and reused
daddy, is disappearing again!
my body errupts,
pain takes over
these peices of a family just don't quite fit
As the bombs go off

I am so lost
and you must've seen me
because you've taken my hand
given me a warm blanket
and a smile
removing my "hopeless" brand

As marked by fame as your life may be
you rise from the crowd as a loving family
and though I will not tred on that sacred ground
I will Share in your light and fall into your melodous lullabies
from a distance you look like an angel to me

[Troll]

Great stuff.

[dreamer]

thanks

[greek fanatic]

Dawn will burn
I will rise
I am still a little girl
so confused
My mommy is so sweet now but I can't get her hate out of my soul
I want to love her but I don't remember joy residing with us
dead girl walking rinsed and reused
daddy, is disappearing again!
my body errupts,
pain takes over
these peices of a family just don't quite fit
As the bombs go off

I am so lost
and you must've seen me
because you've taken my hand
given me a warm blanket
and a smile
removing my "hopeless" brand

As marked by fame as your life may be
you rise from the crowd as a loving family
and though I will not tred on that sacred ground
I will Share in your light and fall into your melodous lullabies
from a distance you look like an angel to me

YOU KNOW WHAT YOU ARE AN ARTIST TOO.THIS IS VERY MATURE,I BELIEVE YOU ARE AWESOME.:love::love::love:

[mcjessica]

Both amazing poems Misty!
I'm in awe. :)

[tonyme]

Extremely beautiful :love:

[dreamer]

more later