Let Him Live

[goinUP]

There's a bird soaring through the sky,
Let him live.
There's a baby crying inside,
Let him live.
A dog whines for one last chance,
Let him live.
There's no time for a second glance.

Let him live,
Give him a shot at life..
No one gets to live twice.
Let him live,
Don't ask him to die for no reason,
There's no revenge for treason.
So let him live.

A man sitting on the edge of death row,
He didn't do it, but he's the only one that knows.
An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind,
And if you listen closely, you will find...

It's best to just let him live,
God's the only one who has life to give,
God's the only one who has life to take,
And there's no one who can imitate.

People in the Middle East are innocent,
But we can't treat them half decent..
They're just people, just like us...
Let them live.

There's a bird soaring through the sky,
Let him live.
There's the Spirit of Peace asking why...
Let him live.

[StarryShania]

That's really great Jenna ! :great:

[SevenUp!]

Very good Jenna....the poem, and the message too.

[goinUP]

That's really great Jenna ! :great:

Thanks Alicia! :)

Very good Jenna....the poem, and the message too.

Thanks Robert. I was inspired by a little caterpillar I almost stepped on earlier...oopppsss....:uhh:

[periphrastic]

the (seeming) motivations behind the poem are understood, and communicated well

keep writing!

[goinUP]

Thanks! :D I definitely will keep writing...it's the best thing ever!

[dreamer]

love the last 2 lines beautiful work

[Shania1627]

great poem Jenna, I wish I could write something like that.

[dreamer]

you can........

and don't say a word!

[goinUP]

love the last 2 lines beautiful work

Thanks, Misty! :D

great poem Jenna, I wish I could write something like that.

Thanks so much, Alli. And I agree with Misty...

you can........

and don't say a word!

:]

[dreamer]

good:]

[Shania1627]

you can........

and don't say a word!i try all the time and cant think of anything as good as what you two come up with, so yeah, i cant, i disagree with you.

[goinUP]

i try all the time and cant think of anything as good as what you two come up with, so yeah, i cant, i disagree with you.

Excuse me? How dare you disagree! :p

More seriously, if you really do disagree, ask Robert what he thought about writing just last year. Then ask him what changed and how he changed it. Next, go find one of his poems and see for yourself exactly how amazing his writing is, just a short while after he said "oh, I can't write, it's not my thing."

[Shania1627]

Excuse me? How dare you disagree! :p

More seriously, if you really do disagree, ask Robert what he thought about writing just last year. Then ask him what changed and how he changed it. Next, go find one of his poems and see for yourself exactly how amazing his writing is, just a short while after he said "oh, I can't write, it's not my thing."ok, but where is mister Robert right now? out of town aka away from his comp, and by the time he gets back im gonna have forgotten.

[goinUP]

ok, but where is mister Robert right now? out of town aka away from his comp, and by the time he gets back im gonna have forgotten.

I'll ask him to talk to you and then remind him later. Either that or I'll just remind you! :p

Still, scroll through the artist's forum a bit...he's written some good stuff and it's all here. Just imagine him saying that he can't write, then read what he DID write. Then use that to help kick your anti-writing thoughts out of your brain!

[Shania1627]

I'll ask him to talk to you and then remind him later. Either that or I'll just remind you! :p

Still, scroll through the artist's forum a bit...he's written some good stuff and it's all here. Just imagine him saying that he can't write, then read what he DID write. Then use that to help kick your anti-writing thoughts out of your brain!okay. sounds good.

[dreamer]

good is relative anyway

[goinUP]

okay. sounds good.

Doesn't just sound good. It is good. :D

[dreamer]

yep!!