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goinUP
11-22-2007, 2:31am
If only, if only...
If only skies were never gray,
And denim could never fray.
If only birds would always sing,
And winter would melt quickly into spring.

If only, if only...

If only grass were green all year long,
Friendships never broke, still going strong.
If only love was a circle with no end...
And if only rules were there to bend.
If only the world were just right
As we lay down for bed tonight.

If only, if only...

If only it were tea for two,
For me, for you.
If only there was not a lost soul,
No greed over worthless gold.
If only love didn't hurt,
And life gave back what it's worth.

If only, if only...

ELEANOR MAW
11-22-2007, 3:20am
Thanks for your loverly little poem Jenna.

SevenUp!
11-22-2007, 8:56am
Very nice Jenna.

Troll
11-22-2007, 10:34am
Great poem.

goinUP
11-22-2007, 11:19am
Thanks, guys! :D

dreamer
11-22-2007, 3:00pm
good work Jenna

goinUP
11-22-2007, 4:24pm
Thanks, Misty! :]

dreamer
11-22-2007, 5:57pm
you did the work not me

goinUP
11-22-2007, 6:38pm
Aww yeah but you're still very generous with your compliments.

dreamer
11-22-2007, 6:48pm
you all seem to think I define poetry and writing but you are just as good at leat maybe better

goinUP
11-22-2007, 8:47pm
All the writers here are simply amazing, IMO. :love:

dreamer
11-22-2007, 9:58pm
I agree!

StarryShania
11-24-2007, 2:44pm
That's really good Jenna.

dreamer
11-24-2007, 3:54pm
very to the point to:D

goinUP
11-24-2007, 4:21pm
Thanks you two! :)

dreamer
11-24-2007, 4:53pm
:great: