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SevenUp!
11-27-2007, 9:41pm
Rocks are not always hard and cold
Break down and heat up, when they get old.
Rocks can be big, and rocks can be small
Whatever the size, they cause and break falls.

Some rocks get kicked all over the ground
Others so special, held onto when found.
Some rocks are new and some rocks are old
Some we let go of, while others we hold.

Rocks can hurt, rocks can heal
Have alot to do with how we feel.
Rocks take us up, and rocks bring us down
Helping us keep our feet on the ground.

Rocks are to lean on when things look bleak
Rocks are so special, each one unique.
Although at times it's hard to see where
Can count on them to always be there.

StarryShania
11-27-2007, 9:44pm
:shocked: Did you write this poem ?

SevenUp!
11-27-2007, 9:48pm
Uhhh yeah :hide:

StarryShania
11-27-2007, 9:58pm
It's really good ! :great:

I like it.

SevenUp!
11-27-2007, 10:01pm
Awww, thanks. :]

goinUP
11-27-2007, 10:03pm
Uhhh yeah :hide:

Now why would you :hide: when you wrote an awesome poem!? Get out from under there and say something for yourself! :p

Great job, Robert, as always.

SevenUp!
11-27-2007, 10:09pm
LOL!!!

Thanks Jenna, as always.

Paul
11-27-2007, 10:42pm
A Geology poem! I might try to get my class to do this next time we do rocks and soils in Geography, they would love it. As teachers we are encouraged to make lessons cross-curricular, so Geography done through English is a good way to do that, and it can be hard to come up with lessons which do.

Thanks for the inspiration Robert. That was great.

SevenUp!
11-28-2007, 12:11am
Thanks a bunch Paul....glad you liked it, and that it inspired you. :]

ELEANOR MAW
11-28-2007, 3:36am
Great Poem Robert.

Troll
11-28-2007, 9:59am
Great poem.

SevenUp!
11-28-2007, 9:09pm
Great Poem Robert.

Great poem.

Thanks both of you.