My New Song

[benperkins]

WARNING: This song is about bringing up painful memorys and its qutie dark and disterbing. If you don't want to see this kind of thing leave now :p


My Mask Is Down

I bleed black blood
from wounds you've opened
If you think your soul is dark
you have'nt seen this black hart.
you have seen the real me
A hunched back monster

What is it that you need to know
why do you cut into me
Why can't you just see
my past is mine alone

You kick me now I'm down
the faces are coming back
why will'nt they leave alone??

Help Me
Help Me
Help Me

Okay now my mask is down
see my dark soul laied bare
This is my drakest fear
yes theres plenty to see here

Come on come see


Ben

[benperkins]

hmmm no one wants to read! :rolleyes:

Ben

[Woody&Love 4ever]

I did!! :D And I like it Ben :)

ely

[egon_from_sweden]

I liked it too!!!:)
Keep up the good work!

Egon, Sweden
My Instrumental Song:
http://www.angen.net/~egon/ehom_in_the_disty_morning.mp3
Me on the bass & guitars :)

[Tupi]

Ben......maybe it isnt perfect, or sad and dark....but I really think you have a REAL talent, and you should work it more, then you will bring the best of you in your songs!!!!

Pretty cool Ben!!! Keep on writing! :):up:

[benperkins]

Thanks :)

Its my favourite so far that I've writen because of the last line "Yes theres plenty to see here, Come On Come See" . A little freaky I think :)

Ben

[razorbac]

it's good :)